关于英语小短文翻译，着急，谢谢

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Hello, my dear teachers and schoolmates, my English name is..... I'm from the beautiful of fujian. Here I am,have a geeat time with everyone.

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Hello,everyone.I'm glad to meet you.My English name is...I'm from xiamen, FUJIAN Province.I'm work in xiamen.That is my country.I love fujian.I love English.So i am learning English now.I've been learning English for a year.Can you tell me about hou to learn English?Thank you for listen to me.
Yours,sincerely.
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好。我为你写了一个简单的自我介绍。第一段基本是你的提问里的汉语的翻译。第二段介绍你的家庭。第三段介绍你的性格。第四段是你的爱好。最后一段是结束语，也是你提问里的翻译。如果你觉得还不够长，可以添加一些关于你工作经历，职业理想，最喜欢的歌曲等等内容。

额。。该加分给我了吧？ 累啊！

good morning(afternoon),everyone! My english name is XXX, and I'm from Fujian. it is a beautiful city. welcome you to my hometown!
There are ___persons in my family.(besides my parents and me,I have a _______.)My father/mother worked for__________.And both them are in good health.
I am a curious person,and I like to learn new things.(我是个好奇的人，喜欢学习新的东西). I'm interested in English。 i like talking with people in English.
My favorite hobbies are_________\_________(reading ,listening to music...)
I'm so glad to be with you here. I work in Xiamen . i hope we can have a great time together
hello,guys.My english name is XXX,I'm from Fujian,a beautiful city.I'm so glad to come here with you all.I'm working in Xiamen,hope we can have a great time together

这样很简单，你看行不